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My friends, YiffyOne and Soltaker21, are making efforts toward developing an idea for a good horror game. Between us, a lot of the opening plot is fleshed out. I was placed in charge of the second main character, and was responsible for making concept sketches of his designs in both humanesque and feral forms.

I feel I did a rather smashing job on this one. I may be improving, which would make me happy.

Directly pointed at YiffyOne and Soltaker21, how did I do? It's a rough design. I really am looking for add-ons and ideas rather than criticism right now, as this may be far from final product if you don't care for it.

Everyone else is free to say whatever about it. Hope it pleases! <3

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:iconyiffyone:
Oh man!! Cornzie, you really outdid yourself on this... I can't help but admire the amazing detail you put into it.

The humanesque character is almost just how I pictured him, looking geared up for what was supposed to be a camping trip near some old ruins, a tad of a roguish, outgoing charm to him. My only addition to the pic would be a cocky grin, or a feral sneer, stanced for battle. The fully feral form is also extremely impressive.

It leaves me to wonder what monster-esque features he develops first...

Ummm... Before I think of add-ons, you might want to lose the bandana, and add maybe... hmmm.... a scar from the crash. Just a small one, to add a scraggly look to his face. Don't care where.

The monster arm, I think, should be made a little bulkier, and more noticeable--give him more of a freakish, powerful look that offsets him.

If you could give me that, shirtless, in a battle stance, I think you'd develop a lot more to it. also, colors! Tell me your ideas on the colors!

Great Job, my friend, you've made me very, very happy. This should be a BIG step in the direction I'm looking for ^_^

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I'm so Yiffy,

Oh-so Yiffy,

So Yiffy--

And Spiffy,

And.... uh...
:iconyiffyone:
Oh! One more thing... have you thought of a good name yet? It should be fairly common... but suitable ^_^

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I'm so Yiffy,

Oh-so Yiffy,

So Yiffy--

And Spiffy,

And.... uh...
:iconyiffyone:
[link]

Your own fave section on my page... You've earned it! :heart:_:heart:

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I'm so Yiffy,

Oh-so Yiffy,

So Yiffy--

And Spiffy,

And.... uh...
:iconbloody-wolfdemongirl:
I love this one! Especially the guy on the left. He looks so cool! ^_^ :+fav:

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Man who run in front of car get tired
Man who run behind car get exhausted
Man who drive like hell bound to get there
Man who stand on toilet is high on pot
Man who fart in church sit in own pew
Man who fish in other mans well often catch crabs
:icontejutsu:
very nice, I remember this one. I love the human; its different from the way you usually draw but still cool and hawt.

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If you're Emo and you you know it slit your wrists
Cut, cut....

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